Hey Lauren, I saw your elevator pitch and really liked what i saw. From your previous two elevator pitches I made the implications that you needed to be more concise and better to the point. You already have a brilliant idea for your process and all I think that would push you to the top would be this pitch. On this try i really think you nailed it. You got your point across very clearly like if it was a script. Im sure you rehearsed the pitch because it seemed done well.
Hey Lauren,
ReplyDeleteI saw your elevator pitch and really liked what i saw. From your previous two elevator pitches I made the implications that you needed to be more concise and better to the point. You already have a brilliant idea for your process and all I think that would push you to the top would be this pitch. On this try i really think you nailed it. You got your point across very clearly like if it was a script. Im sure you rehearsed the pitch because it seemed done well.